Happy September everybody! The first person to read this will be my 400th viewer. *yay* Congratualtions, whoever you are - you win that warm, fuzzy feeling of knowing that you won something. Also, you can have an imaginary firework.
To the rest of you, hard luck. And also, Welcome! Come take a gander at the next portion of the Spider and Hound series. This will probably be the last one for a while, as I find my thoughts turning back towards my perpetually incomplete novel once more. Since I actually want to make proper headway with it this time, I'm putting everything else on the backburner (and it also gives me a chance to figure out what happens next - this one went off in a direction I wasn't expecting).
On a related note, I've managed to muster the courage to get a beta reader for my novel (through the WritersBeat forum - anyone into that sort of thing should defintely check it out), and I'd quite like another couple. If anyone's interested in picking holes in my plot and pointing out punctuation mistakes, let me know and I'll send you a link.
But anyway, enough rambling. Here's some words for you.
Into The Fire
To the rest of you, hard luck. And also, Welcome! Come take a gander at the next portion of the Spider and Hound series. This will probably be the last one for a while, as I find my thoughts turning back towards my perpetually incomplete novel once more. Since I actually want to make proper headway with it this time, I'm putting everything else on the backburner (and it also gives me a chance to figure out what happens next - this one went off in a direction I wasn't expecting).
On a related note, I've managed to muster the courage to get a beta reader for my novel (through the WritersBeat forum - anyone into that sort of thing should defintely check it out), and I'd quite like another couple. If anyone's interested in picking holes in my plot and pointing out punctuation mistakes, let me know and I'll send you a link.
But anyway, enough rambling. Here's some words for you.
Into The Fire
There were people around her. The fuzzy impressions of
dozens of conscious minds surrounded her, joined together by one particular
emotion. Outrage. Slowly, Aislin forced herself to wake up.
Sound reached her first. The people were all talking,
shouting, arguing, crying. Then she felt the aches, her legs unable to stretch,
her side bruised from lying on some hard surface. Smell was next, the tang of
iron and oak, tainted with stale sweat and old urine. Finally, she risked
opening her eyes.
"She's waking up!"
"Aislin? Are you alright?"
"Does she look alright? Give her a minute to wake herself."
"Aislin, what's going on?"
"There must've been a mistake."
Feeling groggy, Aislin watched the faces peering down at
her. It took her a while to piece together what her senses were telling her.
Eventually, though, she drew her focus away from the faces and onto the bars
that were keeping the crowd back.
She was in a cage. Even as slow as her mind was working, she
still recognised what was happening. She was on display.
It was a common punishment in other parts of the kingdom,
she knew. Display the criminal in the most public place, expose them to the
taunts, jeers, and projectiles of their neighbours, make them regret what they
had done. But there were no jeers here, no rotten fruit thrown or chamber pots
emptied over her. Instead, the crowd grumbled unhappily at a punishment that
hadn't been used in Kilmerrow for over a generation.
The cage itself was tiny. Whoever had put her in here had
curled her legs up almost to her chin to fit her in, and there was barely
enough head room to sit up. Thank
goodness I'm small. Aislin thought. She shifted herself gracelessly until
she was more or less upright, back bowed to keep her head clear of the top of
the cage. Wrinkling her nose against the smells of fear and deprivation that
had permeated into the wooden base, she finally paid attention to the people
around her.
"How long have I been here?"
"Couple of hours." Someone replied. "The
Hound carried ye into town and put ye in there. Said ye were under arrest fer treason. He won't tell us no more. He
won't listen to us, neither."
"Cos ye called him seven kinds of idiot." Another
voice chipped in. "Dunno where ye found the nerve."
"It him what's got the nerve, locking up our Aislin like
this. It's bloody ridiculous, excuse me language."
"What do ye think he meant by 'treason'?" A
younger voice asked.
"Prob'ly just an excuse to do what he likes. Ye know
those city men, think they're better than us. Bet she did something he didn't
like, and he made summat up to arrest her fer."
"Stop talking for a minute." Aislin said. Silence
spread, and she made the most of it.
"Does Lord Mayer know about this?" She demanded.
"If he dint before, he will soon." That was Ersson
the innkeeper, pushing his way closer to her cage. "I sent a lad to tell
him. He wouldn't allow this on his land, not if he knew. Don't worry, girl,
we'll get this sorted."
"He might not have a choice." When she saw Ersson
starting to argue, she added, "Would you argue with the Hound?"
"Already have." He announced proudly. "Gave
him a tongue lashing just as soon as he came back. Chucked him out, told him he
weren't welcome if this is how he treats us.
Aislin pressed her knuckles to her mouth as he spoke.
"You've lost your mind."
"Not a bit of it, girl. We ain't having ye trussed up
out here like an animal. If he's got a problem with ye, he can come through
us."
A cheer went up from the assembled people. Aislin almost
cried.
"You've all lost your minds! You can't argue with the King's Bloodhound. If he
can arrest me for treason, he can arrest you all as accessories."
"He can't arrest all of us."
"He bloody well can!"
Shock rippled through the crowd, but not for the reason
Aislin was hoping for.
"Where'd ye learn language like that, girl?"
"Master Ersson, please..."
But Ersson wasn't listening anymore. His attention had been
drawn by a movement in the crowd.
"Alright gents, ladies, move yerselves, let me
through." Another familiar face appeared, and he didn't have to push
through the throng because people stood aside for him. It wasn't that he was an
important man. It was simply that he, of all people, had a right to be at the
front. It was also the last person Aislin wanted to see standing up for her.
Sefton's father, Clift Brin.
"Uncle..."
"Never mind any of that, Aislin." He waved her
worries away before turning to the crowd. "Now, you folk not listening to
her? It's the King's Bloodhoud what's got her, not a local guard. You think he
can't arrest ye all? Well, he don't need to - there's lots a ways he can get
ye. So how about ye break this up, give our girl some space, and get back to
yer jobs. Ain't time enough in the day to be wasting it here."
Aislin watched as the energy slowly seeped form the crowd.
Clift Brin was an imposing man, and he spoke as though used to having his
orders obeyed. Within an impressively short time, people were dispersing,
filing away from the square, back to their own lives. Clift waited until the
majority of people were gone before turning back.
"You shouldn't be here." Aislin spoke first.
"If anyone's in danger from the Hound, it's you and the others."
"It's a fine mess where yer worrying about me, girl. I
can take care of meself, and the family. Besides, seems we're owing ye
something anyway."
"What do you mean, owing me?"
"Didn't know he was the Hound, when he came t'see us.
Seemed a decent fella, said he was trying t'help ye out. Told 'im all sorts of stuff 'bout ye. When I found
out..." He sucked on his teeth in frustration. "Well, I figured it
was the end fer us. He was huntin' ye, and he could use us t'get ye. Reckoned
we'd be thrown in the cells by nightfall. But he didn't have to do anything, ye
just came sauntering back into town on yer own."
"There was no need to lock you up. All he needed was to
be here."
"All he needed fer ye t'walk into his grasp?"
"I had a plan."
"And a fine plan it was too."
"It was, and is, as long as your being here now doesn't
mess it all up." She said pointedly.
"Just what d'ye think we need protecting from,
girl?"
"Haven't you heard what I've been arrested for?
Treason, Uncle."
"Ye ain't no traitor."
"I guess that's a matter of opinion."
"Did my boy get ye into this mess?"
"Sefton? No. This particular mess is all mine."
"Hmm. Well, I hope that's true, or he'll be feeling the
back of my hand." Clift Brin paused, then, with an edge to his voice,
added, "If I see him, o'course."
"I'd hope you wouldn't be seeing him, given the
circumstances." Aislin frowned. Surely Sefton wouldn't have gone to see
his father after all they had done to keep the Brins out of trouble?
"Ye never know, eh? Boys can do the damndest
things."
"Well, if you do see him, tell him he's being an idiot,
and he needs to get back to work. There are people relying on him."
"Relying on ye, too?"
"I'm sure I couldn't say."
Clift Brin sighed.
"Didn't I always tell ye t'keep yer head down, keep
yerself out of trouble?"
"You did. And I listened to you. I've kept myself out
of trouble for a long time." She grinned cheekily. "But then the
Hound found me."
"And now yer locked in a cage, marked as a traitor, and
likely to be hanged soon as ye get to Rane."
"I'll just have to keep away from Rane, then."
"Can't see as how ye've much of a choice."
"I've always got choices, Uncle. Don't worry about me,
I'll get myself out of this. And if you see that son of yours, give him a slap
from me and send him on his way. I'll get word to him when I can."
"He won't like that."
"He doesn't have to. But I don't need him to rescue me,
and if he tries it he'll upset my plan."
Clift Brin chuckled.
"Ye've grown up just like yer mother. She was just as
stubborn, when she set her mind on something." He nodded. "Alright, I
won't argue with ye. Just keep yerself safe, Aislin."
"I will."
"And, if ye get the chance, take care of that useless
boy of mine, too?"
"Always, uncle."
Clift Brin nodded, hesitated, then walked smartly away.
The day passed slowly, alone in the cage. After taking her
shoes off, Aislin found she could jut her legs out through the bars, which gave
her the space to stretch her cramped calves, but there was nothing to do except
sit and swing her feet.
Just after noon, someone brought her some bread and cheese
and a flask of water. After that, a group of children ferried a small cushion
out, mumbled something about their mother, and raced away again. Towards
evening, Ersson appeared with a bowl of stew and a mug of cider. Neither bowl
nor mug could be forced through the bars, so the rest of the inn staff helped
carry out a table to place alongside the cage. Aislin ate through the bars, and
smiled inwardly. Occasionally she felt the eyes of the Hound on her, but not
one Kilmerrow guard was sent out to take her comforts away.
Finally, night fell. As the temperature dropped, one final
gift was sent her way. This was brought by a young man with the face of a
little boy Aislin had once known, but it was clear the gift wasn't from him.
The quilt that the boy tucked through the bars had once adorned her bed when
she had stayed with the Brins.
"G'night miss Kay." The boy grinned.
"Goodnight." She called to the already fleeing
figure.
Between the cushion and the blanket, there was a chance of a
reasonable night's sleep. It took a lot of experimenting, but eventually Aislin
found a comfortable position and closed her eyes.
She was allowed a couple of hours sleep. Before the sun had
even started to take the edge from the dark, she was hustled out of the cage,
into manacles, and onto a horse. A guard climbed up behind her and, with
another two guards flanking, the Hound led the small group out of Kilmerrow.
"Are there really going to be four of you all the way
to Rane?" She asked the guard behind her as they rode. He looked
uncomfortable, and didn't reply. "I must be more dangerous than I
thought."
"I'm not taking any chances with you, mistress
Kay." The Hound called over.
"I'm just one person, my Lord."
"So am I, Spider."
Mentally conceding that point, Aislin looked over her
shoulder at her guard.
"But the difference is that I'm one person that doesn't
know how to fight."
Again, there was no reply from her guard, but she knew every
word she said made him even more uncomfortable. He knew who she was, and the
trouble he'd be in when he returned to Kilmerrow.
"And that is what I'm taking advantage of." The
Hound replied. "Now stop speaking to the men. I know what you can do with
words. If you have anything to say, you can say it to me."
"What will happen when we get to Rane?"
"You will stand trial and be hanged for treason."
"Assuming the trial finds me guilty?"
"I think there's no danger of it finding you
innocent."
"So, given what I know of the city's justice system,
once we reach Rane I'll be dead by sunset, yes?"
"Oh no. Hangings are a morning affair. You'll have the
night to make peace with your gods."
"Make peace with my gods?" Aislin laughed. "I
don't need to make peace, not with myself and not with any gods that might care.
Can you say the same?"
"I can." The Hound nodded. "Because I'm not
being hanged."
"Flippant." Aislin grumbled.
"You have no idea how long I've been hunting you,
Spider. Now there's only three days until you're brought to justice." He
glanced at her, and he was smiling. "I'm in a very good mood."
"Three days? We'll be lucky to reach the capital in
three days."
"Not at the speed we'll be going. I'd save your breath,
Spider. You're going to need it for the ride."
Two nights later, Aislin sat on a hillside in the dark,
breathing sweet, cool air and rubbing her wrists where, in the real world, iron
cuffs chafed them. Above her, strange stars swirled and blinked in the night sky.
Five of them burned too close, too bright, and in four of them, hazy shapes
moved.
She was so tired. The Hound had been right about their
speed. They had hardly stopped to rest the horses, let alone themselves. And
the nights only made her more tired.
The guard house they had stopped at the night before had
been small, and by the time her guards had joined the three men stationed
there, it was bursting at the seams. There hadn't been any opportunity for
sleep that night - too many sleeping minds, too close to her own. If she slept
it would be anything but restful, and her own dreams would bleed into those around
her. Not that she minded the nightmares she would have given the guards; it was
the thought of sharing dreams with the Hound that made her shiver.
The cell she was in tonight was only marginally better. This
close to Rane, everything was bigger and better staffed. The barracks were two
floors above her, and although there were more men up there, they were well out
of range. On the downside, there were more cells as well, and the minds of the
three other occupants pressed against hers uncomfortably. Finally, the Hound -
as untrusting as he was - had set up a pallet in the hallway so he could be on
hand should she try to escape. She might have risked sleep with only the minds
of her fellow prisoners nearby, but with the Hound so close it wasn't an
option. Again.
Overhead, the stars that were dreams drifted lazily through
the night. She could tell which star belonged to the Hound. It was sharper than
the others, defined at the edges and cloudy in the centre. In the other stars,
faint images hinted at the dreams being played out across unconscious minds,
but there was no hint of that with the Hound. If she tried, she could push her
way into his dreams like she did with everyone else. If she tried, she could
learn all his secrets that way.
But she dared not try. Common sense told her that he didn't
dream like she did, that she would be in control, that he wouldn't even
remember her being there. Common sense didn't reassure her. The Hound's mind
was one place she never wanted to go.
"So where does that leave me?" She asked herself
grumpily. "Asleep but not asleep. I can't have another day like this."
"Where are we?"
Aislin leapt up, spun, almost screamed at the sight that
greeted her. Standing behind her was the Hound.
"What? What are you...? What are you doing here? Go
away!"
"Worried, Spider? I already knew you could do
magic."
"You shouldn't be here. You can't be here."
"Then take us back."
"We're not... I haven't... I didn't do this. Please my lord, just go back."
"Well I didn't bring us here. If it wasn't you, who was
it?" He was staring at the sky with a frown, but he wasn't angry. Aislin
paused.
Something in his attitude told her he was still asleep.
Conscious, he would be more worried about having been transported away from the
guard tower. Unconscious, he was only curious.
"I don't know." Aislin lied. "Theron, where
were you before this?"
"At home."
"Where's home?"
"Why would I tell you that?"
Even unconscious, the Hound was still shrewd.
"I just think you should go back there now. Just think
about home, and I'm sure you'll be there."
"There are pictures in those stars."
"Theron, please listen to me. Go back home. You
shouldn't be here."
"What is this place?"
"If you won't go on your own, I'll have to force you.
But I don't want to do that. I've never done it before, I don't know what will
happen. You have to go back home, Theron."
There was a canny look in his eye as he stared at her.
"Why don't you want me here?"
It was too much. Aislin tensed, pushed at the Hound, shoving him out of her mind. She couldn't
control it, she could only push. It was up to fate whether his mind would
return to his body or not.
Eventually, she realised she was pushing against nothing. Her
intruder was nowhere to be seen. Shaking, she sank to the grass again.
Worry began to gnaw at her. What if Theron's mind hadn't
made it back to his body? It would be a fate worse than death. Above her, his
star still burned as bright as before, but that was no indication. Without a
mind, the body would still be alive, and so the star would still burn. It was
only his thoughts, his dreams, that would stop.
Carefully, almost fearfully, she sent her thoughts probing
at the edges of the Hound's mind. It was harder than she had expected, and with
each moment her fear grew. He's gone,
he's not there, I've killed him...
But then there was movement, and the hint of voices. Aislin
had the fleeting impression of farmland before she withdrew, almost fainting in
relief. He wasn't dead, she had simply pushed him into a deep sleep.
And, lying there on the grass, she had an idea.
Her mother had warned her against doing this. It takes away a person's free will. If you
have to use it, use it only for something small and simple. Complicated
instructions tend to get confusing, and they will have no ability to adapt if
things go wrong.
One of the good things about being closer to the capital was
that people were less committed to their work. Take the guard outside the
cells, for instance. The night before, her guard had been alert all night,
despite only having two prisoners to care for. Here, with twice the number of
prisoners, the guard had fallen asleep at the first opportunity, legs propped
on the desk, and a pot balanced by the door which would topple and wake him if
anyone came in.
Even as tired as she was, it was with practiced ease that
Aislin pushed into his dreams and told him what to do.
Somehow, she forced her eyes open and rolled to her feet.
Not for the first time, she wished the time she spent on the hillside counted
as proper sleep, but it was as bad as being awake. By the time she had roused
herself enough to take notice of her surroundings again, the guard had risen,
opened her cell, and returned to his table and his nap, completely unaware of
what he had done. She rose, and crept forwards.
The cell door seemed to creak loudly enough to wake the
entire tower. Aislin waited for long, tense moments, listening for sounds of
movement. None came. She breathed again.
Slipping past the sleeping guard, she moved as quietly as
she could to the door. Ear to the wood, she could hear no sounds from the other
side, although she knew the Hound was asleep out there. How deeply asleep would
he need to be, she wondered, to ignore the sounds of a prisoner escaping? Was
he under far enough? Nothing she could do about it now, but the manacles still
adorned her wrists, and there was just no way to keep them completely silent. She
couldn't unlock them - the Hound had the key, and there wasn't a chance she was
going to try and take it from him - and her lock-picking skills were meagre at
best. Whatever happened, she was going to make a noise.
There was nothing for it. She had to try, or resign herself
to the noose. Breath held, she eased the door open and crept into the hallway.
It was pitch black. The light in the cells had ruined her
night vision, and she blinked rapidly, trying to clear afterimages from her
eyes. After tortuous minutes, the darkness began to recede and Aislin could
find outlines of the room around her.
The Hound's pallet was right next to her, so his head was up
against the door to the cells. To her right were the large, iron-studded doors
that led outside; barred for the night, they were impenetrable to her. Across
the room was another door, and to her left were stairs. She also remembered the
frontage of the tower from her arrival earlier - the windows on the lower floor
were all barred as well, making escape through them impossible.
Kitchen. She
thought muzzily. There has to be a
kitchen. And where there's a kitchen, there's usually a back door.
It didn't matter how still she held her arms, the manacles
still clanked as she slipped down the hallway towards the stairs. Every step
had her turning to look at the slumbering Hound, expecting each noise to be the one that woke him. But he slept on,
oblivious.
She passed the foot of the stairs, into the darkest corner
of the corridor. Praying to find a doorway in the thick shadows, Aislin felt
her way along the wall.
There. Her chains knocked against the handle as she passed,
but the noise fell on unhearing ears. Quickly, Aislin turned the handle and
hurried into the room beyond.
She had been right - it was the kitchen. Large windows in
here let in more moonlight, making it easy for her to avoid the tables, boxes,
and barrels that littered the floor. At the far end was another barred and
bolted door, but these bolts were freshly oiled, and the key sat helpfully in
the lock.
She made far too much noise pulling back the bolts and
heaving the heavy door open. Somewhere above, she thought she heard the
mutterings of sleep disturbed, but she didn't stop to listen. The cool night
air hit her face, and she was off, running towards a stand of trees visible in
the moonlight. She hadn't planned any further than this, but she didn't dare
stop to think further ahead. Running on instinct, she made for the highway and
the faint hope of a ride north.
It was the middle of the night. Obviously, there were no
travellers on the road. Aislin paused on the beaten path for a moment to catch
her breath, and forced herself to think about her next move.
She couldn't run straight back to Sefton. As much as she
wanted to be back among the people she knew, she couldn't take the risk of
leading the Hound to them. And turning north on the road was the most obvious
choice, now she came to think about it. She had to do something
unexpected, something to throw the Hound
off her tracks. For a moment, she considered staying put, keeping close to the
guard tower and waiting until they were out searching before making her move.
If she was just dealing with the guards, she would have risked it.
Feeling exposed, Aislin hurried off the road again and
crouched down next to some bushes, keeping the plants between her and any
pursuit. With difficulty, she called to mind a map of the local towns. None of
them had any real rebel force - there were more sympathisers in the south than
in the north, but when you lived within a day's ride of the capital and the
soldiers stationed there, you tried not to cause trouble. Harbouring a rebel fugitive
would go far beyond what they were willing to do.
And even if she did
think of somewhere to run to, how was she going to get there with the manacles
still locked around her wrists? Any law-fearing citizen would run straight to
the guards the moment they saw her, knowing her for an escaped prisoner. She
had to get rid of them somehow.
Following a thought to the end was becoming hard. All she
wanted to do was curl up right there and sleep. Even her fear of discovery was
dulled by her tiredness - she had to force herself to stand and shake some life
back into her limbs. The manacles rattled as she moved. They were pretty loose,
she realised. Not loose enough to fall off, but maybe with some
encouragement...
Aislin had been given a thick wooden bracelet for her
birthday when she was six. She had loved that bracelet, but had lost it after
only a month. When she eventually found it, over a year later, she had
immediately tried to put it back on, but as she had grown over that year, it
wouldn't fit. She had spent hours trying to force it over the bulge of her
thumb, scratching herself with her own nails and rubbing the skin from her
hand. At seven years old, her wounds were agony, but she had managed it. If she
could do it then, she could certainly do it now.
It took longer than she was happy with, and made far too
much noise. After each attempt, she peered around her sheltering bush as though
expecting to see guards running for her, drawn by the clanking of the metal and
her own muttered curses. Finally though, she wedged one foot against the
manacles and, with energy born more from frustration than anything else, pulled
as hard as she could.
Metal tore skin, bones creaked, and her shoulders ached, but
the manacles began to shift. The pain seemed to lesser the more there was of
it, so Aislin pulled harder and prayed that she would still be able to use her
hands afterwards. And then they were off, falling to the ground, and she toppled
backwards with the sudden release. Her arms were strangely tingly, and her
hands throbbed with heat, but for now they were blissfully numb.
It occurred to Aislin that, as she had struggled with her
chains, her mind had reached its own decision as to her next move. There was
really only one place the Hound wouldn't look for her, because it was the one place
in the kingdom where rebels feared to tread. She called herself several kinds
of fool as she caught her breath and staggered back to the road, but she didn't
think of changing her mind.
And that was how, with useless, bloody hands and stumbling
feet, the Spider turned herself south towards Rane.
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